Analysis of this stanza – Beautiful woman.
Moonaa Asked: Analysis of this stanza?
Sellotape bandaged around my hand,
I rounded up as many white cat hairs
as I could, smoothed down your shirts
upturned collar, steeled the softening
of my face. I wanted to graze my nose
across the tip of your nose, play at
being Eskimos like we did when
you were little. I resisted the impulse
to run my fingers through the gelled
blackthorns of your hair. All my words
flattened, rolled, turned into felt,
This is the second stanza from the poem Poppies by Jane Weir. I've analysed it a bit and found some literary devices, but am really struggling to find more.
Any help?
Answers:
That would be dumb as sh$t.You do not enter enemy territory (HER FRIENDS, NOT YOURS), vent and than expect things to be peachy.If you need to vent, hit up your boys who will tell you to dump her, which you won't do but feels good in some weird macho way (helps you blow off steam and than you move past it)
Not a guy but I'd say, don't do it.
My husband did this years ago to my best friend to try to see if I was cheating on him (I wasn't) she of course told me and then I told my husband (albeit angrily).If you have a problem with your wife, you shouldn't rag on her to her friends, your friends or your family.Talk to her or a counselor or priest… someone with no investment or bias in your relationship.This goes for wives too.It's very dishonoring to badmouth, criticize or vent about your spouse to anyone else other than a professional third-party.
ROFLMAO
Wow brah…just wow…
Okay…my best bud for years bought a house not far from me…her & her mate at the time were having issues, we socialized together frequently as a group…he would knock himself out everytime they fought to be the first one to tell me (I think because my place was the gather spot) first HIS side of the story….I found it amusing & frequently didn't bust him on it, but if he was saying out of line stuff, well my first loyalty was to her, so of course I'd tell her…yeah, she dumped his whiny, needy butt…
Not saying that you are whiny or needy….but really bad strategy….really bad…
Look, I am sorry for your lot, but I've got to thank you for giving me the biggest laugh I've had all day….
Good luck & for the love of mike don't do it again….
still ROFLMAO
No way No Way No way…any problems we have is OUR problem…I so not need one of her friends giving any advice..(they have their own problems…misery loves company)
When I speak to her friends, it is only positives and how much my wife is a blessing (even when we struggle).That way if any gossip comes out there is supprt from her friends and not negative seeds planted.
If we were to take our problems and pile them up in front of us…as soon as you saw others issurs…you would take your problems back.
